Essay..... I Believe

                                       The Life Is Good

 

I am from the Dominican Republic, where some people don’t have much opportunity. In August 2011, I came to the United States, and I didn’t know English. When I started school I didn’t understand, but I kept fighting to do well in the school. I believe that to get my dream I have to fight against the barriers such as economic, language and prejudice. Some dreams are hard to get, but not impossible.

            I remember when I was a freshman and all ESL students took a math quiz. After it was finished,  I got higher grades than the people who spoke English, and in that moment I thought that now I will never give up. I have to persevere and force myself to learn English. In the classroom there were some students who spoke English, I  think the teacher acts differently with me because I am Latin and sometimes I feel bad when some teachers are explaining something to me and  they think I don’t understand and I need an interpreter. 

            Although I am still fighting barriers, people can still be mean and talk about me behind my back. I ignore them. I just want to be a good student without problems. Spanish speakers also offend me in English because they know I might not understand what they are saying. But for me anything is possible because I try my best in all of my classes to achieve my goals because I always believe in myself and what I can do.

            My beliefs have led me to make good decisions, receive many honors, and make my parents and my ESL teachers very proud of me. I feel glad with myself for all I have done. I have learned about great things, for example, not being shy when speaking English with others. When I am talking and they don’t understand what I am talking, but I keep trying and I never give up or feel bad about it.

             I came from a country that is hard to get opportunities and I believe I have to fight hard to achieve my goals and dreams, but it is not impossible to get what I want. I believe that I can fight for a good life and break down any barriers.

10. Time to Write

2. Be possible

         3.This tip is will help me because for me anything is possible to me because a try to do my best in all of my class to get good grade also because I always believe in my and I can do what I propose in my life.

4.My belief is the dreams and hope because dream mean like plan that you have in your mind.

5.I going to start my essay wretting the hook then be more specific, talk a little of what i going to talk about, Thesis Statement, my first reason, second reason, and third reason then i have to explain the reason put quotes and some example and then write the conclution explaining all what i write

9.Great Beginnings

 

     2. I was 45 years old when I decided to learn how to surf. -Brian Grazer

3. I want to keep reading about this because never is late for old people to learn new things because if younger people have the chance to get a career why the old people can no have the same chance also to learn surf is no age for learning. Never is late for learn anything new.

5. My two possiblbe ways how to start a essay are:     

1. write the hook then be more specific.
2. Thesis Statement.
3. First reason, second reason and third reason.
4. Conclusion. 

   

8. Exploring Sample Essays

              2.    This essay by Ying Ying Yu a girl with 13 year old and she from China this essay it about how was her life in China where education is the center of every child life. And to get a good education she   have pass for hard things and for that she has learn anything just to get good grade. She believe in duty, but that belief comes with sacrifice.The achievements she make come with a cost. She believe that because only duty will offter her something true and something worthy of her effort. And she doesn´t believe in the dreams because she things that dreams are illusions.
            3. I choose this essay because this girl is a girl to someone can be proud of her girl because she has pass for difficult things to get a great education and good grade a country that no gave a lot of opportunity

            Extra credict:

      1.  This essay by Jackie Robinson he was a black player in major league baseball  and he think that whatever obstacles he found made himself fight all the harder and that his goal it would have been impossible for him to fight. He believe in the human race, in the warm heart and he believe in the goodness of free society because he fight against the barriers that kept negroes out of baseball. I choose this essay because i think this articles is interesting because I like how he thinks and he fight for what he wants.

7.Lessons Learned

                             

            2. The 3 thing I have learned in my life are:

       







   1.  To don't trust nobody because you don't know 100% who is everyone and you don't know if one time a friend want to do something wrong to you the person who supposed to me your best friend.

       


    2. To don't carry nobody packages/backpack because a person who get drugs one time tell me to carry his backpack and a police what to see what I get in the backpack and then I going to be the person who is going to be in trouble and not him .

 

         3.To don't tell my problems to nobody because nobody going to fix the problem, then they can tell yours problem to other person and maybe the person that I tell my problems don't going to tell me their           problems.

             
           
             

6. Quotations

           3. Quotations 

       1. Young people need models not critics.

       2. Do not let what you cannot do interfere with what you can do.

            4. Thing before acting

 My parents always tell to my sisters and  me to thing before we do something because if we did something already we going to pay for what we did and also can affect us future. For example my father tell to older sister to thing before acting and now she was preagnant and she stop to study so if she had throught before doing the thing had had a better job and finish their college.

5. Seeing is believing

        2. Choose one of the statements you agreed with from the survey ?

      I choose "Miracles do happen" i believe that because went is no time that someone pass to the other side god give the miracles to that person. For example this man of the this video had a car accident and left the car and inserted a metal in from of his mouth through the following and with a miracles the Mr. is alive and the only problem was the he lost the half of his tooth but thanks of the miracles the Mr is alive.

                                           

                                          

4. What is a personal Essay

        

               

          1. Prompts     

         The word hero mean a person that made something for other people without receiving anything back.

             2. My prompts

            I am happiest when I am on the computer looking through a small camera lens. Also because do thing that no have how to give thanks to her. For me, a hero is defined as a person who has sacrificed his or her life for another person. Throughout my life, there have been many fantastic people who have helped shape my life. However, if I had to choose one person who has influenced me the most, it would be my mother. She has been a constant in my life. She embodies the true definition of hero because she is my counselor, my caretaker, comforter.

             My mother is heroic because she is amazing counselor. I used to be a bad girl in high school but now I am a nice girl because my mother advised me that I was not nice and that the teacher called her all the time. During class I was not serious because i told jokes. I remember when in my school the Dominic Republic the teacher gave me a lot of homework and my mother helped me to write my homework then it was so late like 11:05 p.m. and my mom sent me to sleep and said that she would finish my work.

     There is no doubt in my mind that my mom is my hero because she is an honest woman. The reason that I chose her as my hero is because she makes a lot of things for me and she does not expect anything back. Another reason that I say that my mother is a hero for me is because she is an amazing, attentive, and a wonderful mom. I say this because when I leave my country she still talks with me through the computer and adviser me a lot.

3.Creating Your Credo

                           

    1. The rules that I learned in kindergarten was to:

• I lean how to do my best 
• How to share           

   Those rules help are still applicable to life for me today because now i share my stuff with my friends but if i know that they going to give me back my stuff . And about how to do my best is when my teacher give me homework and I don't understand i try to do my best in understand the homework also when the teacher give me a project i try to do the best in any work.

                  2.  All I Need to Know I Learned IN Kindwegarden

                   * The three "basic truths" that I identify is with share everything, clean up my own mess and say sorry when I hurt somebody.

                * The world could be better place if we say sorry when we hurt somebody because if the       person can feel sorry for somebody it mean that the person can care for someone that not                               theyself.

                 3. Credo Formula

I believe in the dreams,

the go do the maximum,

the chasing our purpose, 

the never give up,

the positive things,

the get up purpose, the hope, the destroy the barriers

But I dont believe in that only good people have dreams.

I believe in be somebody,

I believe in some dreams are hard to get,

I believe in to follow my instincts,

the dreams are no imposible, the dreaming is believing, the dreams mean future.

And I believe in fight for my dreams and what i want because i will like to be someone in the Unated States and get the American dreams.
            Rubric
                                                        Credo Poem
    Name: Anabel                        Teacher: Yearger
 
     Date: May 29,2014             Title of work: I believe                                                      

2.Search

2. I choose "In the Dephths of solitude" by Tupac Shakur because it talk about learn to live and find the peace. Also the author try to say that people happening is when the people are themselves, you always have to be happy  because no everybody will be accepted you and feel as if he belongs trying to be the person trying to be the person that the person want  them to be, but it's not possible because you can't please everybody, while trying to gain the resepect he wants from them peers.